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Thursday, 27 November 2014

Eleven

In writing we watched "Eleven". We then created our very own endings for what happened immediately after the video ends. Enjoy.


Eleven by Emily

They were gaining on me. I looked back at their spider-like legs and their red as blood laser eyes. I ran around the corner so I was well hidden. I let my eyes travel across the rocky ground looking for a pebble to use as a bullet for the bullets in mine were all gone. “There’s my walkie-talkie!” I muttered under my breath. I picked it up and tried speaking into it once again. “Get the aliens out of here!” “Did you say, get the aliens?” “NO!!!!” I screamed. “We’ll put you on hold while we try to bring extra large robots with laser eyes to your location.”

I picked up about 10 pebbles, ran out of my hiding spot with a plan. I quickly chucked them at the robots spraying body-parts all over the place. I grabbed them and attached them to my body as quick as I could because I heard trumpets and the sound of scuttling noises coming towards me.

The next thing I saw was an important looking robot with what looked like a crown on his head. “Beep Bop?” He said addressing me. Not knowing what to say I blurted out “Bob Bob!” I think it offended him because the next moment the robots that were blowing the trumpets grabbed me and chucked me in the dungeon. I then realised that the armour wouldn’t come off and I couldn't speak properly! I The King came down to check on the prisoners in the dungeon and with a wave of his arm sentenced them all to death… including ME!!! 

Eleven by Benadiks

I was sprinting across the corner like a lightning bolt. I found a little hole to hide into. The robots ran away and must have thought I was dead. One robot called out “4511 has been terminated”. It was narrow and squashy in hole. I eventually climbed out of the little hole. I remembered that I had dropped my walkie-talkie. My good luck was gone. I snuck back slowly towards my walkie-talkie. I found it and still that annoying sound was going on. I didn’t want to be chased again so I activated stealth mode.

Walking around I found the alien’s weapon room. Those robots were gearing up for something.
I felt nervous. I got my blaster and started shooting. BAM!!!! I took some gear and then I saw a locked up vault. I walked very carefully outside. Nothing, nothing was there.

As I walked back inside a huge alien robot grabbed me. After many hours I woke up. I was locked in a jail cell. I touched the bars they were electric with a very strong current. I saw some of the astronauts in my team in the cells next to me.

I heard a loud blast. All of the walls were now broken. My team and I ran as fast as we could and eventually managed to find our ship and escape the very deadly planet. The mother ship came towards us. ZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!! Our ship was falling. All of us activated our space jet-packs. We were going to have a war. We fired our death-ray.  But it wasn’t strong enough. They shot flaming fire balls. Our commander said that planting a blazing bomb could destroy the mother ship. We fired our lasers to distract the mothership while one of our pods planted the blazing bomb. The mothership exploded. KABOOOSH!!!!!!! We were back on track. “To the space station” I shouted.


Eleven by Harshikesh

I was being chased round a cave soon I saw a gap that I could fit through so I hid in that gap as the robots went past me. I nearly got spotted I picked up my walkie-talkie. I tried, but no signal.

Later on I found an abandoned ship that was old and dusty which had a radio. “BOOM, BOOM, BOOM!!!” “What was that noise? It was coming from under ground. I followed the sound. I fell down into the dark.

I woke up in front of my teammate’s jail bar’s. I shot the lock open, he was free he was so relieved. After that we snuck up to the old ship luckily my teammate had the call code. I typed in 4566 we called for back up.

A few minute’s later the robot's started to come closer we began shooting. The war had begun “BOOM, BOOM, BOOM” robots blew up everywhere. “BANG, BANG, BANG” gun’s shot everywhere.

We had won the fight. We climbed onto the ship and left planet Mars. We were heading back to planet Earth when “beep, beep, beep”.  “What the….”    

1 comment:

  1. liked Emily's story. mostly the end it was frightening

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